Start
with a reference to a recent international relations event or
statement at the Italian, EU or international level that relates, or
illustrates or leads into the topic of the title/question and is
proof of its importance.
Then
an interpretation of the title if necessary and/or a contextualizing
of it.
Then
your argument, the position you will take on the topic. This essay
will argue that......
It
can't be a non-argument, This essay will argue that
economics is very important. (who would deny that? When you wrote
your thesis you were encouraged to find a real thesis.
For
example, This essay will argue that while economic growth is very
important to any country, in a time of crisis, like that of the
Coronavirus, Covid-19, it must take second place to public health at
least in the short term.
Your
argument should be clear, in no way extreme, politically biased or
controversial in the negative sense, and should be in line with the
Italian government's position (or the EU's, or the UN's) and the best
academic and expert opinion. This still leaves you space to
intelligently explore the doubts connected to a topic and different
but legitimate approaches to the question, but you should avoid
'blaming' countries unless you think the Italian government would
really use that kind of language.
At
the end of your introduction, which shouldn't be more than two thirds
of a page, the reader should have a clear idea of your interpretation
of the title/question and what your essay will argue.
You
don't have to agree with me about this!!
Discuss this with your fellow students. You can work out another
approach but I think any
approach must bring the question in the title into focus and offer a
clear and well-thought-out position on the topic, one that reflects
the fact that you are trying to become a diplomat, not a journalist.
The language you use in your essay should be balanced, nuanced, with
the wording carefully chosen, without becoming empty, repetitious and
bureaucratic. For any assertion you make you should offer proof or an
example from current affairs.
On
any subject, you need to show that you are
Well-informed
– Have you done enough research and got the facts? What's the position of
the Ministero? Are you reading its website? Can you demonstrate that?
And not just the theory concerning a question (the law, for example)
but real examples of the practical realities in international
relations and the difficulties these create for governments and
diplomats.
Up-to-date
– not giving an explanation of a topic which is no longer true or
no longer relevant.
Balanced
– does your essay give a fair account of the issues and positions
involved and come to a reasonable and diplomatic conclusion?
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